Monday, April 23, 2012

Structurin a Proposal Argument

Introduction: Over the years, childhood obesity has been increasing.  One solution is to have physical education mandatory from elementary school all the way through out high school.

Explanation of the problem: This needs to be solved because a lot of children are obese and are more at risk to life threatening diseases.

Explanation of the solution: Making children take physical education from early on will get them to have exercise as a daily routine.

Benefits of the solution: They would get used to daily exercise and would probably eat healthier or exercise when they become adults.

Refutation of opposing arguments: One might say that it wouldn't make a difference or they would give children an excuse to be more unhealthy since they're exercising.

Conclusion:  It might seem that there is no way to stop childhood obesity, but there is a solution.  It should start where kids spend the most time, which is the school.
 

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